R1 Comic Camellia Results (2024)

Round 1 Results

Comic Camellia League

Final Deadline: June 22nd 2024

Judged by: Minty & EE (and sometimes Vashle)

Feedback released ~2:40am EST 10.16.2024

Match 1

Shiori & Sana vs Cadet & FAIR-E

Shiori & Sana			Cadet & FAIR-E
A lore-heavy entry where we really got to see more of Shiroi and how Sana is affecting her! Very intrigued to see where this continues to go. Also some difficulty with discerning some of this comic. An enjoyable read!			An interesting entry that really showed off Cadet's skills of manipulation and information acquisition. There were some very rough sections that made it hard to read, but overall the plot is well done and the comic is a fun read!
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
22.5	42.5	6.5	15.5	33	5

Overall Winner: Shiori & Sana

+21.3%

Match 2

Dave vs Adriel

Dave			Adriel
Dave's Crossroads debut! Unfortunately the entry is unfinished, however what we do have is interesting and leaves the audience wanting to see more. Keep creating!			Adriel meets his latest bullying victim..! It was a good choice to focus on their opposing stances on family and friends, it led to a fun read with Adriel becoming more unhinged.
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
6	24.5	3.5	15.5	42	6.5

Overall Winner: Adriel

+34.5%

Match 3

Mio "Nekomata" vs Jasmine

Mio "Nekomata"			Jasmine
Mio's fight against a hero from another world! The hero v villain dynamic was well-utilized here, with good payoff in the fight from setup done earlier. Careful with clarity in action sequences, some of it was harder to read. Overall a well polished and great comic!			The hero Jasmine's fight against the villainous Mio! The fight was set up well, with ample time given to Mio to really help establish the two's dynamic. It would've been great to see Jasmine struggle more with her doubts as she has a lot of potential to develop in multiple directions if given the right push. A great read!
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
25	43.5	6.5	16	30	4.5

Overall Winner: Mio "Nekomata"

+28.2%

Match 4

Kazuya & Masaru vs Tony

Kazuya & Masaru			Tony
The plot thickens with blight(ed Crossguard)! A fun read that has a possible romance blossoming! Tony could've been developed a bit more, but he has the potential to return and help Kazuya & Masaru in their fight against the blight. An enjoyable read!			Unfortunately due to life circumstances Tony had to forfeit this round. We hope he can enjoy his time in Crossroads!
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
16.3	46	5.3	N/A	N/A	N/A

Overall Winner: Kazuya & Masaru

+77.8%

Total knockout!