R1 Comic Lily Results (2024)
Round 1 Results
Comic Iris League
Final Deadline: June 15th 2024
Judged by: Minty & Vashle
Feedback released ~10:00pm EST 10.15.2024
Match 1
Rikka & Niko vs Bes Bandagehead
| Rikka & Niko |
Bes Bandagehead |
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| Rikka & Niko's debut round was a bit sketchy, but we were able to see their potential! Unfortunately the unfinished nature does hinder the work, but we were glad to have gotten to see the whole picture of what you were going for. Good effort! |
Bes' debut round had him gaining an unlikely(?) ally! We're excited to see where he goes next, and it was good to see how Rikka & Niko made Bes question his resolve. |
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| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| 17.5 | 30 | 3.5 | 21 | 50.5 | 6.5 |
Overall Winner: Bes Bandagehead
+31.1%
Exciting fight!
Match 2
Asai & Adi vs Erica
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Asai & Adi |
Erica |
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| Unfortunately due to life circumstances Asai & Adi had to forfeit this round. We hope they can enjoy their time in Crossroads! | You had a lot going on in this round by kicking it off with a murder mystery! There were a lot of characters to keep track of in this entry, which was progressively more difficult as the round went on. Overall the entry would have benefitted from more editing. It was a unique fun read! |
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| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| N/A | N/A | N/A | 24.5 | 32.5 | 4 |
Overall Winner: Erica
+75.3%
Knock out!
Match 3
Ria vs Marta & Seth
| Ria |
Marta & Seth |
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| Unfortunately due to life circumstances Ria had to forfeit this round. We hope she can enjoy her time in Crossroads! |
Marta & Seth's debut in Crossroads! It was great to see them work together and their fight with Ria-- it let us get a good look at all of the characters involved. Overall great job! |
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| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| N/A | N/A | N/A | 23.5 | 50 | 6.5 |
Overall Winner: Marta & Seth
+92%
Knock out!
Match 4
Daoyi vs Rat King
| Daoyi |
Rat King |
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| Daoyi's first official fight in Crossroads-- although it looks like she might need a hand after that ending...? It was good seeing more of Daoyi, but the round felt like it was somewhat stilted in execution. It was an interesting fight to witness! |
Rat King's debut match in Crossroads! It was great hearing more about Rat King and seeing his goal contrast with Daoyi's. Overall a stronger round. |
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| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| 13 | 30 | 4 | 18.5 | 45 | 6 |