R1 Comic Lily Results (2024)
Round 1 Results
Comic Iris League
Final Deadline: June 15th 2024
Judged by: Minty & VashleEE
Feedback released ~10:00pm40pm EST 10.15.2024
Match 1
RikkaDale & NikoGrim Puppy vs Bes BandageheadMiruna
RikkaDale & NikoGrim Puppy
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Bes BandageheadMiruna
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RikkaUnfortunately due to life circumstances Dale & Niko'Grim Puppy had to forfeit this round. We hope they can enjoy their time in Crossroads!
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Miruna's debut roundround! wasA asolid bitvisual sketchy,comic, but we werewould ablelike to see theirmore potential!time Unfortunatelygiven to Miruna and her opponents in the unfinishedfuture. |
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3.5 |
31 |
5 |
Overall Winner: Miruna
+45.4%
Match 2
Lantana & Tressa XIV vs Stanley Steele
Lantana & Tressa XIV
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Stanley Steele
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Having compassionate characters such as Lantana and Tressa pitted against the work,heartless butStanley wemade werefor glada very interesting challenge, both in combat and ideologies. The love and care put into the storytelling can be clearly felt throughout the entry, well done! |
Unfortunately due to havelife gottencircumstances Stanley had to seeforfeit thethis wholeround. pictureWe of what you were going for. Good effort!
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Bes' debut round had him gaining an unlikely(?) ally! We're excited to see wherehope he goescan next, and it was good to see how Rikka & Niko made Bes questionenjoy his resolve.time in Crossroads!
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17.19.5 |
30 |
3.41.5 |
216 |
50.5N/A |
6.5N/A |
N/A |
Overall Winner: BesLantana Bandagehead& Tressa XIV
+31.1%77%
ExcitingKnock fight!out!
Match 23
AsaiGarv & AdiDufort vs EricaReno Rabbit
Garv Asai & AdiDufort
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EricaReno Rabbit
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Unfortunately due to life circumstances Asai & AdiGarv had to forfeit this round. We hope theyhe can enjoy theirhis time in Crossroads!
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YouThe haddichotomy of Reno's fear and Garv's ego resulted in a lotgreat goingpairing onyielding insome thisgrowth roundfor byReno kickingthat itwas offdefinitely withseized. Overall a murder mystery! There were a lot of characters to keep track of in thisgreat entry, whichwell was progressively more difficult as the round went on. Overall the entry would have benefitted from more editing. It was a unique fun read!done!
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24.19.5 |
32.549 |
46 |
Overall Winner: EricaReno Rabbit
+75.3%85.6%
Knock out!
Match 34
RiaLyla vs Marta & SethAzteron
RiaLyla
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Marta & SethAzteron
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Unfortunately due to life circumstances Ria had to forfeit this round. We hope she can enjoy her time in Crossroads!
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Marta & Seth'Lyla's debutfirst fight in Crossroads! ItHer progression of paranoia was greatinteresting and tense to witness! Overall, it would have been nice to see themmore workof togetherAzteron and their fight with Ria-- it let us get a good look at alloutside of the charactersfight involved.to Overallbetter utilize the divine dynamic between the two. Very engaging and enjoyable round to read.
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The grand debut of a vengeful self-righteous god striking down an empathetic devout believer. The digital medium for this comic was very creatively utilized here and was an enjoyable read. A great job!round overall!
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N/A17 |
N/A |
N/A |
23.5 |
50 |
6.5 |
Overall Winner: Marta & Seth
+92%
Knock out!
Match 4
Daoyi vs Rat King
Daoyi
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Rat King
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Daoyi's first official fight in Crossroads-- although it looks like she might need a hand after that ending...? It was good seeing more of Daoyi, but the round felt like it was somewhat stilted in execution. It was an interesting fight to witness!
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Rat King's debut match in Crossroads! It was great hearing more about Rat King and seeing his goal contrast with Daoyi's. Overall a stronger round.
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13 |
3034 |
4 |
18.22.5 |
4553.5 |
6 |
Overall Winner: Rat KingAzteron
+25.9%31.1%