R1 Comic Lily Results (2024)
Round 1 Results
Comic IrisLily League
Final Deadline: June 15th 2024
Judged by: Minty & EE
Feedback released ~10:40pm EST 10.15.2024
Match 1
Dale & Grim Puppy vs Miruna
| Dale & Grim Puppy |
Miruna |
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| Unfortunately due to life circumstances Dale & Grim Puppy had to forfeit this round. We hope they can enjoy their time in Crossroads! |
Miruna's debut round! A solid visual comic, but we would like to see more time given to Miruna and her opponents in the future. | ||||
| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| N/A | N/A | N/A | 3.5 | 31 | 5 |
Overall Winner: Miruna
+45.4%
Match 2
Lantana & Tressa XIV vs Stanley Steele
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Lantana & Tressa XIV |
Stanley Steele |
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| Having compassionate characters such as Lantana and Tressa pitted against the heartless Stanley made for a very interesting challenge, both in combat and ideologies. The love and care put into the storytelling can be clearly felt throughout the entry, well done! | Unfortunately due to life circumstances Stanley had to forfeit this round. We hope he can enjoy his time in Crossroads! |
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| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| 19.5 | 41.5 | 6 | N/A | N/A | N/A |
Overall Winner: Lantana & Tressa XIV
+77%
Knock out!
Match 3
Garv Dufort vs Reno Rabbit
| Garv Dufort |
Reno Rabbit |
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| Unfortunately due to life circumstances Garv had to forfeit this round. We hope he can enjoy his time in Crossroads! |
The dichotomy of Reno's fear and Garv's ego resulted in a great pairing yielding some growth for Reno that was definitely seized. Overall a great entry, well done! |
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| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| N/A | N/A | N/A | 19.5 | 49 | 6 |
Overall Winner: Reno Rabbit
+85.6%
Knock out!
Match 4
Lyla vs Azteron
| Lyla |
Azteron |
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| Lyla's first fight in Crossroads! Her progression of paranoia was interesting and tense to witness! Overall, it would have been nice to see more of Azteron outside of the fight to better utilize the divine dynamic between the two. Very engaging and enjoyable round to read. |
The grand debut of a vengeful self-righteous god striking down an empathetic devout believer. The digital medium for this comic was very creatively utilized here and was an enjoyable read. A great round overall! |
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| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| 17 | 34 | 4 | 22.5 | 53.5 | 6 |