R1 Writer Camellia Results (2024)

Round 1 Results

Final Deadline: May 18th 2024

Judged by: Minty & Sketch

Feedback released ~11:30pm EST 6.10.2024

Zeke vs Overdraw & Pandora

Zeke			Overdraw & Pandora
Unfortunately due to life circumstances Zeke had to forfeit this round. We hope she can enjoy her time in Crossroads!			A thrilling read that crafted a rich and vivid world! Wonderful focus on details that help everything come to life. Amazing character development and use of your opponent, you really gave Zeke a chance to shine and stand her own against Pandora and Overdraw.
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
N/A	N/A	N/A	26.5	54	6

Total Knock-out!

Toffee Brown vs Nerassa & Quinton Salzar

Toffee Brown			Nerassa & Quinton Salzar
You hit the ground running with setting up the two as foils--the dichotomy of the two's mornings was a fantastic tone-setter to the entire entry. You put a lot of effort into using your opponents not just as characters to beat, but as actual characters. Character dialogue can be improved to be more natural, but overall a strong entry.			You had a lot going on in this round by kicking it off with a murder mystery! There were a lot of characters to keep track of in this entry, which was progressively more difficult as the round went on. Overall the entry would have benefitted from more editing. It was a unique fun read!
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
24	46	6.5	24.5	32.5	4

Nalagrom & Baladeth vs Quin

Nalagrom & Baladeth			Quin
You put so much love and detail into every character used in your round! You incorporated Quin and her character, backstory, and lore seamlessly into Nalagrom's own story. Her presence felt natural and important--she shared the spotlight and had some really touching moments with Ms. X and Baladeth.			Quin is such a lovable character and impossible not to root for! Her interactions with Ms. X throughout are amazing and adorable. Having to work together with Nalagrom was amazing to see as they begrudgingly helped one another.
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
28	55.5	6.5	26	53	6

Super tough! Really close fight!

Red Hood vs Myrelle & Pharia

Red Hood			Myrelle & Pharia
Red Hood's dialogue flows like poetry; it's really fun to read her interactions with different characters. Great use of Red Riding Hood's cultural figure status as a backdrop to provide imagery to the piece! Overall a strong entry.			Myrelle & Pharia have such a complex and deep relationship that quickly endears the reader to the characters. Thematic elements of Red Riding Hood were used well! We would have loved to see Red Hood appear earlier in the entry to interact more.
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
25.5	53	5	22.5	39	5