R1 Mixed Wisteria Results (2024)

Round 1 Results

Mixed Wisteria League

Final Deadline: June 8th 2024

Judged by: Minty & Vashle

Feedback released ~12:30am EST 9.23.2024

Match 1

Banafsaj Safi & Maduabuchi vs Hikaru & Ryujin Hoshi

Banafsaj Safi & Maduabuchi			Hikaru & Ryujin Hoshi
Lots of lore come with these two-- you did a great job balancing all of the information and backstory. Good management of a large cast and a good job with your opponent. In the future, don't be afraid to cut some scenes if they start to bog down pacing. Looking forward to development between these two!			A written round with a strong visual novel flare! Do be careful with how many characters you're using-- it's easy to quickly overload scenes. Overall a good round with great characters and a fun fight!
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
20	47	5	11	20	3

Overall Winner: Banafsaj Safi & Maduabuchi

+43.7%

Match 2

Reigai vs Theo & Pudelle

Reigai			Theo & Pudelle
Your writing is unique and creates a fun atmosphere with interesting characters to read about. We'd love to see the lore around Reigai and Gambler developed more! The opponents needed more focus as well, but it was a fun read overall.			A fun round to read! You did a great job expanding more on Theo and Pudelle's relationship, as well as their backstory/lore. Your opponent was used well-- just next time, try to start within the Crossroads arena.
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
5	31	5	14	39	5

Overall Winner: Theo & Pudelle

+19.6%

Match 3

Yuri & Boris vs Jaz

Yuri & Boris			Jaz
A great first start for Yuri with a perfect foil in Jaz! Excited to see how Yuri continues to develop and what devious schemes Boris has cooked up.			Unfortunately due to life circumstances Jaz forfeited this round. We hope they can enjoy their time in Crossroads!
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
23	48	7	N/A	N/A	N/A

Overall Winner: Yuri & Boris

+89.7%

Match 4

Selica vs Eliza & Ronin

Selica			Eliza & Ronin
A very brief execution of Selica's win! While it succeeds in getting from the start of the round to the end, we'd like to see more meat in the entry of characters interacting and developing.			Ronin's first fight as a returning competitor with Eliza! It was clear to see the round had a lot of fun in the creation of it. Try including more depth with character goals and motivations in the next round-- we'd love to see more development of these two and their dynamic.
Storytelling	Execution	Editing	Storytelling	Execution	Editing
4	13.5	4	9	32	6

Overall Winner: Eliza & Ronin

+29.3%