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R1 Comic Camellia Results (2024)

Round 1 Results

Comic LilyCamellia League

Final Deadline: June 15th22nd 2024

Judged by: Minty & EE (and sometimes Vashle)

Feedback released ~10:40pm2:40am EST 10.15.16.2024

Match 1

DaleShiori & Grim PuppySana vs MirunaCadet & FAIR-E
DaleShiori & Grim PuppySana
 MirunaCadet & FAIR-E
Unfortunately due to life circumstances Dale & Grim Puppy had to forfeit this round. We hope they can enjoy their time in Crossroads!
Miruna's debut round! A solidlore-heavy visualentry comic, butwhere we wouldreally likegot to see more timeof givenShiroi and how Sana is affecting her! Very intrigued to Mirunasee where this continues to go. Also some difficulty with discerning some of this comic. An enjoyable read!
An interesting entry that really showed off Cadet's skills of manipulation and herinformation opponentsacquisition. inThere were some very rough sections that made it hard to read, but overall the future.plot is well done and the comic is a fun read!
Storytelling Execution Editing Storytelling Execution Editing
N/AN/AN/A3.22.5 3142.56.515.533 5
Overall Winner: MirunaShiori & Sana
+45.4%21.3%

Match 2

Lantana & Tressa XIVDave vs Stanley SteeleAdriel

Lantana & Tressa XIVDave

 Stanley SteeleAdriel
HavingDave's compassionateCrossroads charactersdebut! suchUnfortunately asthe Lantanaentry is unfinished, however what we do have is interesting and Tressaleaves pittedthe audience wanting to see more. Keep creating!Adriel meets his latest bullying victim..! It was a good choice to focus on their opposing stances on family and friends, it led to a fun read with Adriel becoming more unhinged.
StorytellingExecutionEditingStorytellingExecutionEditing
624.53.515.5426.5
Overall Winner: Adriel
+34.5%

Match 3

Mio "Nekomata" vs Jasmine
Mio "Nekomata"
Jasmine
Mio's fight against a hero from another world! The hero v villain dynamic was well-utilized here, with good payoff in the fight from setup done earlier. Careful with clarity in action sequences, some of it was harder to read. Overall a well polished and great comic!
The hero Jasmine's fight against the heartlessvillainous StanleyMio! madeThe forfight was set up well, with ample time given to Mio to really help establish the two's dynamic. It would've been great to see Jasmine struggle more with her doubts as she has a verylot interestingof challenge,potential bothto develop in combatmultiple directions if given the right push. A great read!
StorytellingExecutionEditingStorytellingExecutionEditing
2543.56.516304.5
Overall Winner: Mio "Nekomata"
+28.2%

Match 4

Kazuya & Masaru vs Tony
Kazuya & Masaru
Tony
The plot thickens with blight(ed Crossguard)! A fun read that had a bit too much spotlight on Cain that could've gone to Tony more, but Tony does have the potential to return and ideologies.help TheKazuya love& andMasaru carein puttheir intofight against the storytellingblight. canAn beenjoyable clearly felt throughout the entry, well done!read! Unfortunately due to life circumstances StanleyTony had to forfeit this round. We hope he can enjoy his time in Crossroads!
Storytelling Execution Editing Storytelling Execution Editing
19.516.3 41.546 65.3 N/A N/A N/A
Overall Winner: LantanaKazuya & Tressa XIVMasaru
+77%77.8%

KnockTotal out!knockout!

Match 3

Garv Dufort vs Reno Rabbit
Garv Dufort
Reno Rabbit
Unfortunately due to life circumstances Garv had to forfeit this round. We hope he can enjoy his time in Crossroads!
The dichotomy of Reno's fear and Garv's ego resulted in a great pairing yielding some growth for Reno that was definitely seized. Overall a great entry, well done!
StorytellingExecutionEditingStorytellingExecutionEditing
N/AN/AN/A19.5496
Overall Winner: Reno Rabbit
+85.6%

Knock out!

Match 4

Lyla vs Azteron
Lyla
Azteron
Lyla's first fight in Crossroads! Her progression of paranoia was interesting and tense to witness! Overall, it would have been nice to see more of Azteron outside of the fight to better utilize the divine dynamic between the two. Very engaging and enjoyable round to read.
The grand debut of a vengeful self-righteous god striking down an empathetic devout believer. The digital medium for this comic was very creatively utilized here and was an enjoyable read. A great round overall!
StorytellingExecutionEditingStorytellingExecutionEditing
1734422.553.56
Overall Winner: Azteron
+31.1%

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