R1 Comic Camellia Results (2024)
Round 1 Results
Comic Camellia League
Final Deadline: June 22nd 2024
Judged by: Minty & EE (and sometimes Vashle)
Feedback released ~2:40am EST 10.16.2024
Match 1
Shiori & Sana vs Cadet & FAIR-E
| Shiori & Sana |
Cadet & FAIR-E |
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| A lore-heavy entry where we really got to see more of Shiroi and how Sana is affecting her! Very intrigued to see where this continues to go. Also some difficulty with discerning some of this comic. An enjoyable read! |
An interesting entry that really showed off Cadet's skills of manipulation and information acquisition. There were some very rough sections that made it hard to read, but overall the plot is well done and the comic is a fun read! | ||||
| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| 22.5 | 42.5 | 6.5 | 15.5 | 33 | 5 |
Overall Winner: Shiori & Sana
+21.3%
Match 2
Dave vs Adriel
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Dave |
Adriel |
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| Dave's Crossroads debut! Unfortunately the entry is unfinished, however what we do have is interesting and leaves the audience wanting to see more. Keep creating! | Adriel meets his latest bullying victim..! It was a good choice to focus on their opposing stances on family and friends, it led to a fun read with Adriel becoming more unhinged. |
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| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| 6 | 24.5 | 3.5 | 15.5 | 42 | 6.5 |
Overall Winner: Adriel
+34.5%
Match 3
Mio "Nekomata" vs Jasmine
| Mio "Nekomata" |
Jasmine |
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| Mio's fight against a hero from another world! The hero v villain dynamic was well-utilized here, with good payoff in the fight from setup done earlier. Careful with clarity in action sequences, some of it was harder to read. Overall a well polished and great comic! |
The hero Jasmine's fight against the villainous Mio! The fight was set up well, with ample time given to Mio to really help establish the two's dynamic. It would've been great to see Jasmine struggle more with her doubts as she has a lot of potential to develop in multiple directions if given the right push. A great read! |
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| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| 25 | 43.5 | 6.5 | 16 | 30 | 4.5 |
Overall Winner: Mio "Nekomata"
+28.2%
Match 4
Kazuya & Masaru vs Tony
| Kazuya & Masaru |
Tony |
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| The plot thickens with blight(ed Crossguard)! A fun read that |
Unfortunately due to life circumstances Tony had to forfeit this round. We hope he can enjoy his time in Crossroads! |
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| Storytelling | Execution | Editing | Storytelling | Execution | Editing |
| 16.3 | 46 | 5.3 | N/A | N/A | N/A |
Overall Winner: Kazuya & Masaru
+77.8%
Total knockout!